Thursday, April 12, 2007

the long skinny finger of doom

it was tragic, but it must be told here we go......


my heart pounded
pounded, pounded, pounded
the long skinny wrinkled finger
pointed, pointed, pointed
"you, my pretty"
who me?
me

side mirrors
in place
emergency brake
off
lights
on

school zone
30
look
40
uh oh

the finger points
Fail
Fail
Fail

3 comments:

chippydiedtwice said...

I really like this, the repetition and format made it interesting to read.

London Bound said...

hmm. i remember hearing about the crazy lady. i tried to talk with the guy that was with me, but he wasnt so much talkative. do you like your job? "yes" thats all i could get out of him. oh well.

Janelle said...

Very dramatic, and effective! Driving test yes? Well, on mine the guy was so..plump that his belly actually was up against my e-brake.. NOT PRETTY!!